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Editorial change log

The brief for this preview was to publish the current chapters without serious edits. Cleanup was limited to formatting, headings, and obvious typos, and the conversion script logs each change. Nothing below changes what a chapter says. Wording, claims, case studies, and the “search terms for ChatGPT” boxes are untouched, and they are flagged for the next editing pass in EVALUATION.md.

Em dashes in the source text were left in place, since replacing them means rewording sentences. The only new copy is the walkthrough section in the out-of-band management chapter, which is marked as added on the page.

Category Total changes
Formatting 250
Structure 176
Typos 174
Headings 88
Added (editor) 1

Source file Technical Ops for Automation Introduction Chapter.docx (Chapter 1 folder, only draft). Read the chapter.

Category Change Count
Headings Shifted heading levels down one step so the page title is the only H1 6

Source file 2nd draft 20240416 out of band management.docx (2nd draft). Read the chapter.

Category Change Count
Structure Removed the static Word table of contents (the site builds its own sidebar and on-page TOC) 12
Formatting Removed typed underscore separators (_____). Each section heading now carries a rule 10
Formatting Grouped the opening Key Topics, Learning Objective, and Summary lines into a Chapter overview box 1
Added (editor) Inserted the interactive BMC-to-ready walkthrough and a short Digital Rebar reference after Automated Discovery and Provisioning. Clearly marked as added for this preview 1

Source file 2nd draft_ 20250311 TechOps Test Scripts.docx (2nd draft). Read the chapter.

Category Change Count
Structure Removed the static Word table of contents (the site builds its own sidebar and on-page TOC) 15
Headings Promoted headings that skipped a level (for example H2 straight to H4) so the outline nests correctly 7
Headings Removed bold markup inside headings 20
Headings Turned full sentences styled as headings (over 110 characters) back into paragraphs 2
Headings Dropped trailing colons from headings 7
Formatting Removed typed underscore separators (_____). Each section heading now carries a rule 13
Formatting Grouped the opening Key Topics, Learning Objective, and Summary lines into a Chapter overview box 1

Source file 2nd draft_ 20240730 UEFI Secure Boot Issue.docx (2nd draft). Read the chapter.

Category Change Count
Structure Removed the static Word table of contents (the site builds its own sidebar and on-page TOC) 12
Headings Removed leftover outline numbering from a heading (for example 5.3) 1
Formatting Removed typed underscore separators (_____). Each section heading now carries a rule 9
Formatting Grouped the opening Key Topics, Learning Objective, and Summary lines into a Chapter overview box 1

Source file 2nd draft_ 20240124 Tech Ops 002 CLIs.docx (2nd draft). Read the chapter.

Category Change Count
Structure Removed the static Word table of contents (the site builds its own sidebar and on-page TOC) 11
Formatting Removed typed underscore separators (_____). Each section heading now carries a rule 8
Formatting Grouped the opening Key Topics, Learning Objective, and Summary lines into a Chapter overview box 1

Source file 2nd draft_ 20230116 TechOps 002 APIs.docx (2nd draft). Read the chapter.

Category Change Count
Structure Removed the static Word table of contents (the site builds its own sidebar and on-page TOC) 12
Formatting Removed typed underscore separators (_____). Each section heading now carries a rule 10
Formatting Grouped the opening Key Topics, Learning Objective, and Summary lines into a Chapter overview box 1

Source file 2nd draft 20240130 TechOps 003 API Consumption.docx (2nd draft). Read the chapter.

Category Change Count
Structure Removed the static Word table of contents (the site builds its own sidebar and on-page TOC) 1
Headings Dropped trailing colons from headings 34
Formatting Removed typed underscore separators (_____). Each section heading now carries a rule 1
Formatting Rendered Markdown that had been pasted into Word as plain text (headings, bullets, bold) as real formatting 7
Typos Removed a doubled word (include include) 1
Typos Collapsed double spaces 2
Formatting Grouped the opening Key Topics, Learning Objective, and Summary lines into a Chapter overview box 1

Source file 2nd draft_ 20240206 TechOps 004 Asynch APIs.docx (2nd draft). Read the chapter.

Category Change Count
Structure Removed the static Word table of contents (the site builds its own sidebar and on-page TOC) 12
Headings Turned full sentences styled as headings (over 110 characters) back into paragraphs 4
Headings Dropped trailing colons from headings 1
Formatting Removed typed underscore separators (_____). Each section heading now carries a rule 10
Typos Fixed a stray keystroke (cu=onsumers) 1
Formatting Grouped the opening Key Topics, Learning Objective, and Summary lines into a Chapter overview box 1

Source file 2nd draft_ 20240213 TechOps 005 Containers.docx (2nd draft). Read the chapter.

Category Change Count
Structure Removed the static Word table of contents (the site builds its own sidebar and on-page TOC) 11
Headings Dropped trailing colons from headings 6
Formatting Removed typed underscore separators (_____). Each section heading now carries a rule 9
Formatting Grouped the opening Key Topics, Learning Objective, and Summary lines into a Chapter overview box 1

Source file 2nd draft_ 20240220 TechOps Containers Manager.docx (2nd draft). Read the chapter.

Category Change Count
Structure Removed the static Word table of contents (the site builds its own sidebar and on-page TOC) 12
Formatting Removed typed underscore separators (_____). Each section heading now carries a rule 9
Formatting Grouped the opening Key Topics, Learning Objective, and Summary lines into a Chapter overview box 1

Source file 2nd draft_ 20240312 TechOps 007 SystemD.docx (2nd draft). Read the chapter.

Category Change Count
Structure Removed the static Word table of contents (the site builds its own sidebar and on-page TOC) 11
Formatting Removed typed underscore separators (_____). Each section heading now carries a rule 10
Typos Spelled the product name as systemd (source wrote System D) 167
Typos Spelled systemd in the chapter title 1
Formatting Grouped the opening Key Topics, Learning Objective, and Summary lines into a Chapter overview box 1

Source file 2nd draft_ 20240305 Tech Ops 006 SBOM.docx (2nd draft). Read the chapter.

Category Change Count
Structure Removed the static Word table of contents (the site builds its own sidebar and on-page TOC) 11
Formatting Removed typed underscore separators (_____). Each section heading now carries a rule 9
Typos Removed a doubled word (and and) 1
Typos Fixed a stray keystroke (into=roduce) 1
Formatting Grouped the opening Key Topics, Learning Objective, and Summary lines into a Chapter overview box 1

Source file 2nd draft_ 20240528 TechOps Logging.docx (2nd draft). Read the chapter.

Category Change Count
Structure Removed the static Word table of contents (the site builds its own sidebar and on-page TOC) 12
Formatting Removed typed underscore separators (_____). Each section heading now carries a rule 9
Formatting Grouped the opening Key Topics, Learning Objective, and Summary lines into a Chapter overview box 1

Source file 2nd draft_ 20240604 SSH TechOps.docx (2nd draft). Read the chapter.

Category Change Count
Structure Removed the static Word table of contents (the site builds its own sidebar and on-page TOC) 13
Formatting Removed typed underscore separators (_____). Each section heading now carries a rule 10
Formatting Grouped the opening Key Topics, Learning Objective, and Summary lines into a Chapter overview box 1

Source file 2nd draft_ 20240611 TechOps HA.docx (2nd draft). Read the chapter.

Category Change Count
Structure Removed the static Word table of contents (the site builds its own sidebar and on-page TOC) 9
Formatting Removed typed underscore separators (_____). Each section heading now carries a rule 7
Formatting Grouped the opening Key Topics, Learning Objective, and Summary lines into a Chapter overview box 1

Source file 1st draft_ 20240613 AI Platform Consolidation.docx (1st draft (only draft)). Read the chapter.

Category Change Count
Structure Removed the static Word table of contents (the site builds its own sidebar and on-page TOC) 1
Formatting Removed typed underscore separators (_____). Each section heading now carries a rule 3
Formatting Rendered Markdown that had been pasted into Word as plain text (headings, bullets, bold) as real formatting 83
Formatting Grouped the opening Key Topics, Learning Objective, and Summary lines into a Chapter overview box 1

Source file 2nd draft_ 20240627 AI and Digital Twins.docx (2nd draft). Read the chapter.

Category Change Count
Structure Removed the static Word table of contents (the site builds its own sidebar and on-page TOC) 11
Formatting Removed typed underscore separators (_____). Each section heading now carries a rule 8
Formatting Grouped the opening Key Topics, Learning Objective, and Summary lines into a Chapter overview box 1

Source file 2nd draft_ 20240718 Two But Rule.docx (2nd draft). Read the chapter.

Category Change Count
Structure Removed the static Word table of contents (the site builds its own sidebar and on-page TOC) 10
Formatting Removed typed underscore separators (_____). Each section heading now carries a rule 8
Formatting Grouped the opening Key Topics, Learning Objective, and Summary lines into a Chapter overview box 1

Preview edition, October 2026. Chapter text is the current draft with light cleanup only.